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Yup, do the conclusion first. Then you lay out your reasoning...

Conclusion comes first, got it...

What's up, Tomori? Anon haranguing you or something?

Who do you think I am? I'm just helping good ol' Tomorin out~

Did something happen?

We had to write an article for class, but Tomorin had hers returned.

I'm in charge of revisions.

...You, of all people?

Haha, Ricky's out of the loop~ I'm a banger writer. I got good grades, as always.

Our teacher had a lot of praise for Anochan today, yeah.

Fine, I guess...

You wanna look at my homework if you think I'm lying so bad? Like, just look! Our teacher applauded this one!

We still have some time before we gotta book a studio.

It sure won't be good if she was teaching Tomori some weird shit. Give me that.

What's this about a theme?

Our homework this time's to write an article based on a theme we got for class! This time it's about environmental issues.

'Cuz there's a lot to write about when it comes to the environment, right? Sooo I wrote an article on makeup packaging, since it's familiar territory for me.

No matter how daunting the task is, as long as I write based on what I know, it's easy as pie for me~

Then, all I gotta do is fit it into the structure of an article.

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I'd be forced to concur. Your conclusion and reasoning is written well, and the examples are easy to comprehend...

But that's where it ends. Nothing interesting about it at all.

WHAAAAT!? It's not like an article HAS to be interesting—!

I literally said it's well written. It also doesn't have a lick of personality.

Can't really say I'd be all crazy about the environment after this, no.

Man... I just don't think you two get it. Good structure and flow are the number one priority in writing an article.

Anyway, can we check out Tomori-chan's work?

I'm totally down for reading it.

I don't... think it's all that...

Can we take a peek? Thanks in advance.

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...This style has Tomori-chan written all over it.

It's so kind and warm... I really love reading through it.

Taki-chan...

Definitely not article material, though. Structurally.

But the way it's written conveys her feelings just fine.

It's similar to your lyrics, Tomori.

I have... to revise and resubmit though...

It's perfect as-is.

It's just hard to judge it as an article, basically.

Come on, is my article seriously that boring? Can we reread? Just to make sure?

I just... Is my writing really so lifeless?

Well, considering I got high grades, it's not like it's THAT weird. Right?

Um, Anochan...

Let's see... I'll make the wording more colorful, then. But at a certain point it'd be too informal to call it an article... In that case...

My homework...

Tackling environmental issues is already hard as concrete, is the problem. Saying my writing has no personality to boot stacks the...

Anochan...!